Out of the Storm

Community Corner => Creative Expressions => Poetry & Creative Writing => Topic started by: Not Alone on March 09, 2021, 10:17:24 PM

Title: Wound
Post by: Not Alone on March 09, 2021, 10:17:24 PM
Wound
Severe. Soul-threatening.
Ignored. Denied. Minimized.

Wound
Emergency survival; hide it within the deepest corner of the heart.
Wound
Forgotten.
Wound
Awoken by a word, a sound, an object. . .
Bleeding. Hurting. Demanding attention.

Wound
Delicate. Fragile. Tender.
Treat it gently.

Wound
Listen to its story. How did the injury occur?
Feel its oozing, painful emotions.
Honor the seriousness of the injury.

Wound
Treat the root cause of the injury, no band-aid.
With care, apply the painful healing ointment of belief, compassion, and acceptance.

Wound
Over time there is healing.
Scar
Beautiful and Ugly.
Testimony of the pain, the journey, and bravery.


Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Pioneer on March 10, 2021, 03:49:20 AM
Thanks for sharing, notalone  :hug: You portrayed raw pain and beautiful hope.
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Snowdrop on March 10, 2021, 06:08:33 AM
 :grouphug:
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Kizzie on March 10, 2021, 06:03:46 PM
 :thumbup:   :applause:    :hug:
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Bella on March 10, 2021, 07:44:54 PM
Well written!  :applause: Thank you for sharing!  :grouphug:
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Not Alone on March 10, 2021, 11:25:08 PM
Thanks, all, for responding. It's a vulnerable thing to post.
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: PhoenixA on April 15, 2021, 11:50:54 PM
Wow.  Very powerful and very vulnerable and real.  Thank you!!!
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Not Alone on April 17, 2021, 03:02:21 AM
PhoenixA, thank you for reading and for your response.
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Armadillo on April 24, 2021, 08:41:25 PM
Thank you notalone. I love the compassion you portray of caring for the wounds.
Title: Re: Wound
Post by: Not Alone on April 24, 2021, 09:24:01 PM
Thank you, Armadillo.