The Search

Started by RiverRabbit, January 26, 2020, 08:57:55 AM

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RiverRabbit

This voice seeking an audience...

This thought seeking a meaning…

This vision seeking grounding…

A Connection… through all of these, she seeks.

This voice seeking an audience… to become heard.

This thought seeking a meaning… to become valid.

This vision seeking grounding… to become real.

And this search is measured in lifetimes.

This voice seeking an audience… to become heard… understood.

This thought seeking a meaning… to become valid… engaged.

This vision seeking grounding… to become real… adopted.

And this search makes her fascinating... compelling.

- River Rabbit

RiverRabbit

Not sure if this really fits here... was banging around in my head so I was compelled to get it down.

Snowdrop

Tears came to my eyes as I read this. It went to my heart. Thank you, RiverRabbit. :hug:

RiverRabbit

This is something new for me... a "structural" poem of sorts.

It is two poems in one... reading it through first, then reading only the last section of each line.

Two messages, working together, giving a third.

I think there is a name for this, but I cannot recall