The ants

[Marian82]

Never mind.

[Hope67]

Hi Marian,
I really admire your creative writing, and I definitely see the messages you convey within it - I think it is really good. 
Hope 

[Marian82]

Thanks!

[BJeanGrey]

It's very well written, Marian82.

Thanks kindly for sharing this.

[Marian82]

Thank you...

[bluepalm]

Marian82 your story is a strong piece of writing. You manage to convey what you intended - without mentioning the abuse you conveyed it in other ways. I read this with my heart jumping for you for taking the left turn but then felt sad when you explained that, like me, you were in a controlling relationship and in reality it was not easy to turn left. I experienced similar autism/sociopathic/narcissism behaviour from my spouse and unfortunately it took me many years before I was able to turn left and start my long struggle to recover.  Thank you for sharing this. I'd encourage you to share more of your creative writing. Don't worry about little cross language issues - you write well. I wish I could write anything in a second language - I can't.
bluepalm

[Marian82]

Thanks.

Sorry you too were in such a situation. Im happy you too, eventually, turned left. I did and managed (after a huge 2 year fight) to keep our child away from him.