Poem

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rainydiary

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« on: June 12, 2021, 12:44:02 AM »
Iíve never really written a poem before but was inspired by the offerings here.  Here is my attempt:

Peace begins with me
Is what I want to feel
Deep in my bones

How is that I can
Create a space for peace for others
While fighting inside

Disorganized, fragmented
Is not peace
But chaos

Piece by piece
Step by step
Slowly I build peace inside

One day
I hope to feel deep
Peace begins with me

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notalone

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« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2021, 01:14:31 AM »
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Yes, piece by piece, step by step.

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« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2021, 03:05:00 AM »
Thank you, Rainydiary; for sharing this beautiful part of your heart with everyone here. It's hard to adequately express from within the hurt places we reside in, but yours is an especially honest start to re-light all of our hearts. I know it did mine -- thanks again for sharing your deep peace in such a lovely way.

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« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2021, 04:21:53 AM »
It's beautiful, Rainy. You got this and keep the poems coming when they arise

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« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2021, 10:58:21 AM »
 :yeahthat:

Your words are resonating rainydiary - keep writing when the words come to you. I've found it helps me enormously to articulate concisely in poetry some aspect of my feelings and experiences. I write without any rules. I write what feels right to me at that moment. It helps to bring order to disorder in my mind. It's an important part of my healing.  Thank you for sharing.